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What question about the letter did you have?

Ok, you would have to copy/paste that wording in here.

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The demand letter gets its main message across, but there’s room to make it stronger and more persuasive from a legal perspective.

Right now, it does a good job identifying the people involved, describing the property clearly, and stating that its return is being demanded. It also wisely mentions the possibility of legal action, including the recovery of attorney’s fees, and notes that the letter itself could be used as evidence in court—these are solid starting points.

That said, there are a few key areas where the letter could be improved. One major issue is the lack of detail explaining why the person receiving the letter is wrongfully holding onto the property. Just saying their possession is “unlawful” isn’t enough without any background.

The letter should explain how the person came to have the vehicle in the first place—was it loaned to them, part of a deal that fell through, or taken without permission? This context is critical to support the claim and strengthen the demand for return.

Also, the reference to “$9,300 per Domestic Wire Transfer” is unclear—it’s not obvious how this relates to the vehicle or the demand. That connection needs to be made clear for the information to carry any weight.

The demand for the vehicle’s return “immediately” sounds urgent, but legally it’s more effective to set a specific deadline. Saying something like “within seven (7) calendar days from the date of this letter” gives the other party a firm timeline and helps build a stronger case if legal action becomes necessary.

The letter should also explain exactly how and where the vehicle should be returned, including contact details to arrange the return.

Finally, it’s a good idea to send the letter by certified mail with a return receipt. That way, you have clear proof that it was sent and received, which can be very helpful if this ends up in court.

This new information significantly clarifies the purpose of the $9,300, making it a crucial element in your demand letter. It establishes that you paid for a service (engine replacement) that presumably wasn't completed, or at least didn't result in the return of your vehicle.

You can use the contents of that email effectively in your demand letter. It shows that you took steps early on to address the issue, which helps establish a record of your efforts with both the authorities and the platform involved.

The timestamp on the email also helps create a clear timeline, showing exactly when you first raised the issue. On top of that, it confirms that the service contract came through eBay, which is key to backing up the legitimacy of your claim.

Chances are, the email also includes important details about the transaction, the vehicle, and the service that wasn’t provided—details that will support what you're asking for in the demand letter.

You don’t need to attach the email to the letter, but it’s smart to reference it. Doing so lets the other party know you’ve already taken steps to resolve the matter and have documentation to back up your claims. Be sure to keep that email handy, along with your wire transfer receipt and the certified mail receipts for your demand letter, as part of your full set of records.

I do hope the information I provided was helpful and addressed your question. If there's anything else you need, please don't hesitate to reach out—I’m always happy to assist. Wishing you a fantastic day ahead!